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It’s winter again
And I feel so alone
Outside everything is frozen, and the air is cold
Take me away from here
Let me be free
Just let me frolic with the birds and the trees
As the wind blows my hair and the animals dance with me
Let me run with the wolves
And feel how it is to run free
Show me how life is supposed to be
Take my hand in yours
And carry me away
Take me to another beautiful day
Say you’ll be free with me and I’ll show you how
I’ll take your hand in mine
Please don’t hesitate now
For this is the world created by me
So I can set those who feel lost
Free….
Help me capture you in my poetry.
©2003-2009 ~Dark-Angel666
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This is for my friend winged-cavalier...who inspired me to not only write with my heart..but with my soul and just to let my poetry carry me away.....so this is what i did in this poem.....Thank you so so so so so much winged-cavalier!!! you set me free!

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:iconwinged-cavalier:
Never forget, in the end, you set yourself free. Just like poetry, life comes from within. Keep letting poetry flow through you. To quote The Dead Poets Society, "let it drip from your tongue like honey". Every verse in every poem is a relfection of the soul. I can already tell that when you write, you cease thinking about your poetry, and truly let it come from within, and if I had anything to do with that, then I could not be more honoured. Just keep the poetry true to yourself, and you will know what to write. Our journey through poetry is a never ending one, but it helps guide us to free our souls. I will stand by you and help you whenever I can, but I think that you have discovered many things on your own, and that this is another stage in the grand progression of life. Well done, I believe that your expression of emotion and your true feelings in this poem go without saying here.

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Remember the simplistic beauty in life, and revel in the spirit of all things around you.
:icondark-angel666:
You know sometimes your comments leave me with nothing to say....i thank you so much and i'm so glad i met u....i will continue to let the poetry flow......and i hope u know i'll be there for u too!....:heart:

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